Thursday, December 17, 2009

Chapter1.3/Generation 1

 **Authors note** I been reading other peoples blogs and getting advice on how to write. Hopefully this will only get better with time. Please vote on the poll and give me feedback in the form of comments. Thanks!! The chapters are listed in order on the left hand side!!**


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Bryce is living out his dream of having  a lot of children. He is family-oriented and is always wanting to woohoo with Anne, or have a child. Either he wants a big family or he is a woohoo addict. Regardless, of his problems the 3 oldest children have a birthday to celebrate. Alex will turn 14 and the twins are turning 5 and starting school.


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Allison is a shy girl and likes to keep to herself. She doesn't fit in well and doesn't get out much. She is athletic, artistic, and hates the outdoors. She has a good mixture of her dad and mom's traits.


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Little Addison wasn't so sure about starting school the next day. She was afraid no one would like her, just like any normal kid. Bryce and Anne tried to tell her that her personality would help her make friends. She is friendly, virtuoso, and mooch. Her and Allison often talk of being famous music composers and marrying musicians one day.


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Blonde hair Alex is thrilled about starting highschool. He thinks 10th grade will be the bomb man. He is athletic and wants to be on the football team, he is absent minded and not very bright, he is ambitious and hopes to be a millionare someday, and he has a great sense of humor and gets along with all the crazy teenage girls out there.


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It seems like all this family does is have birthdays doesn't it?? Well, its Andrews turn to start school. He is good, athletic, and genius. He immediately rolls the become the world's renowned surgeon just like his daddy, so I locked it in as his life-time want. Bryce will have to teach him how to play chess in the very near future.



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Bryce and Anne have had absolutely no time together trying to raise these children up. Now, that they are all out of diapers and over the age of 5, it was time for a date. The couple went and saw a movie, to the bistro for a nice candle lit dinner in their formal wear, and finally fell into each others arms and into bed. For the first time in years, Bryce watches Anne sleep and realizes how much he loves her and has missed her during the raising of their children. He swears that now since the children are older he'll spend more time with his wife.

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Anne threw a huge party down at Central Park for the girls turning 14. Their gift was that they could have a complete makeover, changing their style to whatever they thought their personality showed. During their childhood they had made friends with another set of twins, a boy and girl. Their family had moved into the neighbor when their twins were small. (You may give me links to families you want to see in this story)


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Allison grew up into a very awkward teenager. I'm not sure what happened in the aging process... She did gain the family oriented trait. Lets just hope she can at least fine a decent husband. She chose to go blond because of her favorite color.. and she felt sorry for her big brother for being the only blond in the gang.

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Addison didn't take after her sister, but looks an awful lot like her mother. She chose to look more natural and just added orange highlights to her dark hair. She gained the couch potato trait and she is like way in to music. She still wants to marry a musician.

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Alex and Arina has been friends since elementary, but now that relationship is getting stronger. They do their homework together and on Friday nights they go to the movies and out to eat at the Bistro. Alex even got a job at the book store to pay for their dates. Bryce said the family funds were too low to be giving him money on dates. Anne is already seeing wedding bells, but lets not get ahead of ourselves here, Alex is still only 16 years old. Alex tells Arina all of his dreams for the future.


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"Um, Anne why is your stomach poking out like that?", Bryce asked one morning. He had noticed that she had been packing on some pounds, but Bryce knows what his wife looks like pregnant. "I'm not sure whats going on, you would think I was pregnant the way it looks". Bryce is a doctor after all and he takes her to the hospital to run some test, and sure enough the sonogram showed a baby girl inside there. They had just starting making plans of a vacation in the near future to somewhere like Egypt or France. That's not happening anytime soon.

Leave me comments for feedback, links of families you would like to see in my game, and let me know who and why you think will make the best heir!! Vote in the new poll!!

2 comments:

  1. Very nice update! Its nice to get a feel for the characters...off to read your other chapter!

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